Sara apper, another thing I thought I should mention is that you might want to try and tweak the app so that it's not so focused on Setsuna. I realize that she's very attached to him, but there are ways to tool her answers so that we can get a better idea of who she is as her own person, rather than just in relation to Setsuna. (Actually, the Neko app did a good job of this, so you might want to look at that one for an idea of what I mean.)

For Rin, I was a little thrown by some of the missing commas, but the voice came across strong so I voted you in!