Thanks for getting back to me. I reread with that in mind, and while I'm still not 100% sold on the setup . . . I do think some of that is just that the survey format requires a little more suspension of disbelief as to why characters are filling out the form to begin with, and it doesn't hold up well to adding details. That's not on you, and you do have a good voice, so I flipped my vote!
Re: Billy applicant