Hansel and Gretel, I do know that you're apping from a straightforward action movie, but your apps felt completely interchangeable and I think it's because you kept your answers so short that you never got past the extremely canon-driven responses and on into a little bit of character. If you have to reapp I'd really recommend writing your own questions to draw things out a bit more.
Alex, while I agree with Peter and Kuroko, my larger issue was that I didn't hear any of the childish and charismatic voice the canon led me to expect. She actually came off as all business to me. Maybe a different scenario would showcase more sides of her character better?
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Hansel and Gretel, I do know that you're apping from a straightforward action movie, but your apps felt completely interchangeable and I think it's because you kept your answers so short that you never got past the extremely canon-driven responses and on into a little bit of character. If you have to reapp I'd really recommend writing your own questions to draw things out a bit more.
Alex, while I agree with Peter and Kuroko, my larger issue was that I didn't hear any of the childish and charismatic voice the canon led me to expect. She actually came off as all business to me. Maybe a different scenario would showcase more sides of her character better?