A-ya was out! The canon was extremely bare bones. I'm not really sure what is what. The first paragraph is cool, but it doesn't tell me anything about world, plot, characters, anything. There's a book and you can mark things that come true. That's it. Going straight from there and saying that "A-ya is the quietest of the friends" does nothing for me if I know nothing about the friends or world.
There does seem to be a voice, and I will certainly reread in the morning! But there is just so little information that I am not sure what I am looking at right now.
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A-ya was out! The canon was extremely bare bones. I'm not really sure what is what. The first paragraph is cool, but it doesn't tell me anything about world, plot, characters, anything. There's a book and you can mark things that come true. That's it. Going straight from there and saying that "A-ya is the quietest of the friends" does nothing for me if I know nothing about the friends or world.
There does seem to be a voice, and I will certainly reread in the morning! But there is just so little information that I am not sure what I am looking at right now.