Out for Illumi. I'm canonblind so I had to depend on your canon section. I felt that you didn't really explain the voice so it made me unsure of what to look for in the sample. The sample itself felt disjointed. I also feel that you didn't really need the action tags.
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Out for Illumi. I'm canonblind so I had to depend on your canon section. I felt that you didn't really explain the voice so it made me unsure of what to look for in the sample. The sample itself felt disjointed. I also feel that you didn't really need the action tags.