Out on The Boss. I found it rambly in a lot of parts and seeming to contradict itself, especially when she was talking about people running away from the Worldeater and such. Also, in the way that she addressed camp as though she'd be here all along. The gorilla suit thing came out of nowhere too. Overall, I struggled to get a clear picture of the voice and mostly got a lot of yelling. Also, the water's no longer radioactive... I don't know, I just felt it relied a lot on inside knowledge instead of actual voice.
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In for all others. J'onn, you are perfect!